Talk:SMS Schwaben
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GA Review
[edit]- This review is transcluded from Talk:SMS Schwaben/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Jim Sweeney (talk) 00:06, 22 September 2010 (UTC)
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Comments
[edit]- The text states there were six 45 cm (18 in) torpedo tubes while the inf box has 5 × 45 cm (17.7 in) torpedo tubes
- The footnote could use a cite
- The inf box has - Fate: Scrapped in 1920 but the text says - battleship was stricken from the naval register on 8 March 1921 needs clarification
--Jim Sweeney (talk) 00:21, 22 September 2010 (UTC)
- All three fixed, thanks for reviewing the article, Jim. Parsecboy (talk) 11:08, 22 September 2010 (UTC)
- Passed --Jim Sweeney (talk) 14:23, 22 September 2010 (UTC)
Ranks correct?
[edit]"On 29 August, Kapitän zur See (Captain at Sea) Walter Engelhardt replaced Alberts aboard Schwaben." - A Captain replaces a Rear Admiral (KAdm=Konteradmiral=Rear Admiral)! Serious? Any sources for this? 80.151.9.187 (talk)
- Um, yes, the source cited in that paragraph... Parsecboy (talk) 09:53, 7 August 2019 (UTC)
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